Here are all the members in LSRM (Li Shan Rock Music) 2nd. We have been joining this club for almost three years. When we first enter the club, we know nothing about rock music. But we learned. Between 2006 and 2007, our first year in senior high school, we learned lots of things from the students in the upper class and the teachers. (Including musical skill, the history and information of Rock’n Roll …etc)
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Dear Michel:
All the members in this photo look lively and joyful like you. I believe this club has helped all of you to cultivate passion for music and love for each other as well. You description is clear except for the tense. In the sentence “When we first enter the club, we know nothing about rock music.”, present tense is not appropriate.